I decided that It was a good layout and so after the third draft I decide to design the school magazine

This was my second attempt at my draft for the school magazine, but I though that there could be more that I could add. So I asked several other people that they thought I should add. From the feedback, most people thought I should add a bar-code and price as this would help it look more like a magazine.  

Feedback

This is my first attempt at a draft for my school magazine. I asked some people what they thought about it and what else I should do to make it more like a magazine. 
I got some good feedback, most people agree that I should add a issue number and Date to make it look more like a magazine, I thought this was a good idea, so for my second attempt of my draft I put the issue number and date in.

First draft for school mag